{"id":13059,"date":"2013-01-14T00:06:33","date_gmt":"2013-01-14T04:06:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/?p=13059"},"modified":"2018-08-27T20:57:43","modified_gmt":"2018-08-28T00:57:43","slug":"photographic-composition-working-toward-final-image","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/photographic-composition-working-toward-final-image\/","title":{"rendered":"Photographic composition: Working towards the final image"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/Jessica-Joy-2012_120-final.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<h1>Photography composition: Working toward the final image<\/h1>\n<p>When I first immersed myself in photography way way back, it took me a while to realize that what I see in a magazine or book, isn&#8217;t necessarily the first image. Those incredible images that can inspire us, (or even make us just want to give up photography), most often are not fully-formed masterpieces.\u00a0Most often, the photograph that we as the viewer are presented with, are but one of a series. One photograph that stood out, or where the elements in the photograph were controlled by the photographer. And even with the work of hardcore photo-journalists, what we see, have been &#8220;controlled&#8221; and &#8220;adjusted&#8221;, even if only in terms of lens choice and composition.<\/p>\n<p>With that realization, I felt less intimidated by the great photographs that I saw. They had become more accessible in a way, and more attainable to me as a new photographer.<\/p>\n<p>Photographs with impact or appeal could come to be because of serendipity or foresight and careful planning by the photographer. Quite often it&#8217;s just recognizing the potential of a scene, and working with it to finesse the elements, such as the composition or lighting or, with portraits, the pose.<\/p>\n<p>So it is with this photograph of Jessica Joy, taken just before we started the photo-shoot mentioned in the article,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/colored-gels-with-flash-photography\/\">colored gels with flash photography<\/a>. The final result shown here, is a little bit of everything &#8211; a wonderful subject, an opportunity, and then over the course of several photographs, finessing it.<\/p>\n<p>While I really like this image, and think of this as the final image that I want to present, it didn&#8217;t just &#8220;happen&#8221; as the first and only image. There was an entire sequence leading up to it. It is this first recognition of a potentially good photograph, and then the thought-process in the sequence, that I want to show here.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/Jessica-Joy-2012_142_bw.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"600\" height=\"901\" \/><\/p>\n<p>This photograph is one of the last photographs in the series, and another that I really like.<\/p>\n<p>But this is where we started &#8211; the first image. In the dressing area of the studio, there was this usual mirror with the lightbulbs around it. I asked Jessica to turn to her side so I could see her profile. Since I didn&#8217;t intend using any other light, other than the bunch of lights behind her, I thought this would probably be more of a sillhouette than a well-lit nuanced portrait where she is looking towards the camera.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_075.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>So that&#8217;s the first test shot with her jacket still on. The jacket was too bulky and too noticeable. I wanted the portrait to be about her.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_092.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>With the jacket off, I thought we could simplify it even more by slipping the straps off her shoulders.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_101.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>I really like this photo, but I can see her brightly lit arm reflected in the mirror &#8230; as well as myself. Moving to my left would&#8217;ve solved that.<\/p>\n<p>What was missing though was a certain mood. The photo lacked a sense of mystery. \u00a0I asked Jessica to turn around, and look to her left. I had her bring her hand into the frame, to add more of that sensuality to the image.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_104_1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_104.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>However, her reflection in the mirror was too distracting. It was just too bright, even with the abstraction that a black and white image brings.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div>\n<hr \/>\n<p><div class='one_third'>\n\t\t\t\t\t<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nvn-book4-lighting-design-portrait-photography\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/books\/NvN\/4-lighting-design-375.jpg\" alt=\"Direction &amp; Quality Of Light\" width=\"250\" height=\"324\" \/><\/a>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div><div class='two_third last'>\n\t\t\t\t\t<h2>Lighting &amp; Design for Portrait Photography<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nvn-book4-lighting-design-portrait-photography\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Lighting &amp; Design<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0is a\u00a0follow-up of sorts to <a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/about\/book-direction-quality-of-light\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Direction &amp; Quality of Light<\/a>.\u00a0It\u2019s a slightly eclectic mix, discussing the thought-process with various scenarios shooting portraits. The examples use available light, bounce flash, off-camera flash as well as studio lighting.<\/p>\n<p>The idea is that in every one of the 60 sections, there is something to be learnt and applied, regardless of your level as a photographer or where you shoot\u00a0&#8211; all\u00a0shaped to form a cohesive narrative arc throughout the book.<\/p>\n<p>You can either purchase a copy via\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nvn-book4-lighting-design-portrait-photography\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Amazon USA<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0or <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nvn-book4-lighting-design-portrait-photography-uk\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Amazon UK<\/a><\/strong>. The book\u00a0will\u00a0also available on the Apple iBook Store, and Amazon Kindle.<\/p>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div><div class='clear'><\/div><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>Here&#8217;s a series of three images as I tried to hide the reflections. The hot-spots in the mirror were distracting in two of the images.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_107-trio.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"452\" \/><\/p>\n<p>It needed me to move subtly to the side, and also have Jessica rotate ever so slightly towards the camera &#8230; and there we have it!<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_121.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>The photo above still had that reflection of her in the mirror that was distracting. A slight change in pose hid that &#8230; and there is the final image.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/_tangents\/Jessica-Joy-2012_120.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/images\/models\/jessica-joy\/Jessica-Joy-2012_120-final.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"599\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Paradoxically enough, I ended up liking the cooler, blue-tinted B&amp;W version better. It just had that appealing air of sensual mystery about it.<\/p>\n<p>With this I wanted to show that when you recognize the potential in a scene or the potential with a certain subject &#8211; whether a landscape, or architecture, or a portrait &#8211; that we shouldn&#8217;t just be happy with the first few images. Often enough, we can easily finesse the image until we have something that *really* works. Just don&#8217;t give up too early.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h2>Camera settings &amp; photo gear\u00a0(or equivalents) used during this photo session<\/h2>\n<ul>\n<li>1\/200 @ f\/1.8 @ 1600 ISO<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Nikon D4<\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nikon-85mm-f1-4g\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Nikon AF-S 85mm f\/1.4G<\/a>\u00a0 \/ \u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/canon-ef-85mm-f1-2-ii\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Canon EF 85mm f\/1.2L II USM<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>And since I shot these images at f\/1.8 these more affordable optics would&#8217;ve worked just as well:<br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/nikon-85mm-f1-8g\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Nikon AF-S 85mm f\/1.8G<\/a>\u00a0 \/ \u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/neilvn.com\/tangents\/recommends\/canon-ef-85mm-f1-8\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Canon EF 85mm f\/1.8 USM<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Photography composition: Working toward the final image When I first immersed myself in photography way way back, it took me a while to realize that what I see in a magazine or book, isn&#8217;t necessarily the first image. 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